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By Justin, 13
As Bill was tucked
into bed he asked his dad to tell him a story.
Then his dad said, ”Did I tell you the one that happened to me in 2050?”
Bill replied “no.”
"Well it all started when I was walking home from work. I was going
threw the forest because it was faster then I heard a crash. I was almost
blinded by the bright lights, as I got closer the light started to get
dimmer and dimmer. I saw a giant hole when I got their so I climbed
down the hole and their was a box. I touched the box and it was minutes
later I touched it again and it cooled down, so I picked it up and climbed
out of the hole and took the crate home.
"There was a lock on the box so I called a locksmith and he tried
key after key but when he stuck the key in they all melted. When he
left I tried pulling on the lock all the sudden the lock broke off.
Inside of the box was a map, shovel, and some kind of rock. I followed
the map into the deep forest and I got to the x and I started digging.
"All of a sudden I hit a piece of metal, I saw a handle so I pulled
it open and their was a hole. I looked at the hole and remembered that
I had a rock that shape so I put the rock in the hole.
" All of a sudden I was sucked into the hole, when I woke up I
was in a cave I heard voices so I followed them. I saw flouting bodies,
I asked what they where and they said they where the people that wanted
to die. I asked them then how did I get here, they said the crate you
picked up wasn’t for you. I asked how I would get home and they said
they would't let me go home if I never mentioned this place to anyone
else or tried to find this place again I agreed. Then I fell into another
hole and I was back at my house, you have been the first person I told
about that place now go to bed."
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Last revised: 27 May 2001