Hare and tortoise (cinquain)

By Matthew, Jordan and Jordan, 10, Workington, Cumbria, UK

Tortoise
was very slow
could not run like the hare
he was a confident tortoise
brave thing

Fast hare
was very quick
he could run miles and miles
the hare knew he was going to win
quick thing

The race
The hare went fast
faster than the tortoise
The hare was winning by a bit
speedy

tired hare
hare fell asleep
then the tortoise caught up
good tortoise passes the finish
HOORAY!
(January 2005)

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